Re: [Ethereal-dev] Reviewed and updated "User's Guide" available

[Ulf Lamping <ulf.lamping@xxxxxx>]

Graeme Hewson wrote:

> 5.1:
>
> "Open/Import capture files in various capture file formats" rather than
> "from"

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> "Save/Export capture files in various file formats" rather than "into"

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> 5.2: "in all desktop environments" rather than "on all desktop
> environments"

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> 5.2.1: "GTK version 2.4" rather than "the GTK version 2.4"

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> 5.2.1 action 5: "while is discussed" should be "which is discussed"

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> bottom of 5.2.1: "a good idea to set them already here" would be better
> as "a good idea to set them in advance here"

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> Figure 5.8: The Save in folder: field lets you select ...
> (add "field" and drop apostrophe from "let's")

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> "Browse for other folders provides a flexible way to choose a folder."
> (change to present tense)

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> Figure 5.9:
>
> Drop commas in:
>
> Plain Text specifies,
> Postscript specifies,
> Output to file: specifies,

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> 6.1 typo: overwiev
> "The following table will give an overview of which functions"
> rather than "an overview, which functions"

are you sure? sounds strange to my ear

> 6.2 "the second type of filter" rather than "the second type of filters"

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> "Figure 6.6 ... shows an example" rather than "shown an example"

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> Note under figure 6.6: "The display filter only changes the display of
> the capture file and not its content!"

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> "However" in following paragraph is redundant. "You can filter on any
> protocol that Ethereal understands. You can also filter on ..."

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> 6.3.3 Substring Operator "Ethereal allows you to select" rather than
> "will allow you"

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> "Ethereal allows you to string together ... " (top of next page)

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> 6.4 tip better as "... to learn how to write ..."

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> Under figure 6.7, Field Name "Select a protocol field" rather than
> "protocols"

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> Relation: insert "which": "All other listed relations are binary
> relations which require ..."

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> Last line on p.99: "and possibly some range information."

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> 6.5 warning: "You must use Save to save your filters permanently" rather
> than "permanent".

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> 6.7.2 note, redundant word "are": "As these protocol fields now work
> like ..."

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> "... it's easier simply to double-click" rather than "... it's
> easier to simply double-click".

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> 6.8 "You" rather than "the user" (stylistic point)

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> "shown with a black background" rather than "shown with black background
> color"

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> warning: "not stored in the capture file or anywhere else" rather than
> "somewhere else"

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> 6.9.1 warning: "The time references will not be saved permanently and 
> will be
> lost when you close the capture file."

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> note: "will have no effect" rather than "will take no effect"
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Regards, ULFL